Birthday Card

My friend birthday is coming, so i decide to make a DIY card to him. But i feel the card is not very nice. I not dare to send out. He is a grafic designer, i scare he laugh at my card. So lastly i din send out the card. U all see see n give me some comment on tis card.

Tis picture taken when the half way ..... i feel like very simple so i add on something. After i feel very blank i put in something on it again. How was it ? nice ma ? when yoke yee n kenny see tis, they say not nice at all ......
Make me feel very down. I had use my heart to make it de, but they say not nice. so i not dare to send out. Lastly i buy a card n send to him ...